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my pretty shiny & the fic that won it :D

Title: Ripe for the picking…
Author: kira
Rating: T
Characters: Ban/Jak
Genre, AU/Canon, etc.: Romance, pre-canon timeline
Words: 300
Summary: A cocky young warrior becomes a man…
Warnings: nothing, as yaoi doesn’t count.

Author’s note: Thank you, Jen, for looking this over for me!

Jakotsu looked at the cute young boy, who was sitting on the bath stool, and smiled. Something about him screamed, “Ripe for the picking!” and the cross-dressing bathhouse whore wanted to pick it. Flirting while he washed him, he took his time as he moved the little bag of rice bran over the boy’s wet body. Jakotsu occasionally looked up at him and smiled.

Bankotsu felt his cheeks heating up. He was unused to such attention, especially from a pretty girl, and the way she kept looking at his crotch made him feel really uncomfortable. And yet, her gentle touch soon had him relaxing, and flirting back at her. He got the shock of his life when he discovered that the pretty girl was in fact, a boy.

“I’m sorry, I’m not what you expected,” Jakotsu purred as he slipped out of his kimono, “but I can show you how to have fun if you want.”


The bathhouse whore nodded. “Yup… I know things that’ll make your toes curl up in pleasure.” He winked.

“Really?” Bankotsu asked; his curiosity piqued.

“Yes…” Jakotsu murmured. He kissed Bankotsu as he stroked his cock, which hardened under his touch. He went get a small pot of a thick oily substance. After coating Bankotsu’s cock with it, Jakotsu lay back on the floor, guiding the younger boy in.

Bankotsu groaned as the tight ring of muscle gripped his swollen member. He thrust a few times, little jots of pleasure pooling deep within his belly. Soon it became too much and he climaxed.

“You like?” Jakotsu smiled as he helped him clean up.

Bankotsu nodded.

“So how does it feel to be a man?”

“Hunh?” He blushed.

I knew it! I was your first! the older boy thought smugly.

“You wanna nookie again?”



( 8 comments — Leave a comment )
Aug. 18th, 2009 08:33 am (UTC)
I absolutely LOVE the banner!
Aug. 18th, 2009 12:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Sensei did an awesoem job with the banners, no?
Aug. 18th, 2009 01:48 pm (UTC)
This is Awesome! CONGRATS of the Lovely banner!!

I love how richly you write these two! One of my favourite couples!
Aug. 18th, 2009 03:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Nikki! *huggles* Sensei did an awesoem job with the banner, no?

Thank you! *blushes* They're definitely a fave of mine too! ;p
Aug. 19th, 2009 03:52 am (UTC)
And I think that is probably the cutest banner she has ever made.
Aug. 19th, 2009 04:00 am (UTC)
Thank you!

I know!! I love that pic!! I love Sesnsei's banners!! Ebveryone seems to fit the fic perfectly!!
Aug. 19th, 2009 04:18 am (UTC)
You're welcome.

Aug. 19th, 2009 04:19 am (UTC)
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